alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cookies for Sale?]

this is my harsh review
Too short and the art style looked lazy, 1/5 this stinks better luck next time!!!

[Where is Adeleine?]

There she IS!

[Hiro the Dense]

The humor may not have hit me at all and kind of strike me as forced, but I do think you can draw very well, mostly women. My issues are that you're animation is so limited, to the point where the boob animations on some points were pretty bad, mostly at 3:28. Breasts don't stretch midway when they're jiggling. I also felt the whole "lol the main character is supposed to be a heroic protagonist but his only personality is that he's actually stupid" bit's been done to death and I feel the whole point of this cartoon was to just draw tits and ass. Oh and the punchline at the end, classic memery!! or should i say MEMEtastic?? :)C

ZedrinBot responds:

It wouldn't be a dad joke if it didn't successfully piss a few people off

[Shoot for the Moon]

I thought this cartoon was sweet. Plot might've been pretty redundant with the "this thing wants to go to this thing so they try to go to the thing but then loses hope after few tries but it all goes well in the end and goes to that thing" plot, but I thought it was still cute, mostly when they hug and spin. I think that your usage of skewing should be toned down more because it was often used here and it really bothered me a lot. There's some really good frame by frame parts in this. Wished you used those skills on the skewing/tweened parts. I didn't really like the space ship part where it tweened all over the place. Try redrawing frames of the ship bouncing like jello, kind of like what Studio Gainax/Trigger does in their stuff, since it would have fit your simplistic cartoony art style. I also feel the characters weren't described well or introduced to us. They were just... there. You should've given us more time to in-depth and make us get to know the characters more in the beginning. Props on you for uploading on Newgrounds though. All together, I think this short was cute but sorta two-dimensional and rushed lookin. I believe you can make a better cartoon. You got some talent in ya

DoTheDood responds:

Thanks, this was my first short and was pressed for time (As this was part of what I needed to graduate this year). I honestly do agree on the ship part and some "tweening" (I actually didn't do much tweeting, but a lot of editing frame-by-frame, which basically looked like tweening. Kind of lazy I admit), and this criticisms are really helpful for the next short/animation I work on

[Spider-Thing]

Weird that this wasn't blammed. There's no sound effects and nothing on here made sense. Please add noise or voice acting or MUSIC in your next cartoon. Also please make your cartoons less confusing with it's plot. ajfvfv

[Burnt Rice Meme]

Do something next time that isn't this meme.

[JUMP!]

Some parts looked really jumpy and inconsistent. You also seem to abuse smear frames which isn't good. Try inbetweening slow actions without any smears next time, it'll look more nicer. Overall, it looked okay but it can be better.

[FranzWorld- Rock para perros]

terrible eddsworld rip off, enough said

FranzWorld responds:

ok xd

[Hands]

Funk shit, I dig this a bunch!

loberoso responds:

Cool! Thanks

[The Pacman Collab]

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